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Friday, August 27, 2010 { 12:16 AM }

Here's our edited draft and i added our characters and roles (director etc.) to our profile page :)

Characters
DELINA: Denise.
SANDY: Andrea
ANDY: Sijia
MOM: Yutzu
DAD: Claudia
Kidnapper 1 and police: Yunni
Kidnapper 2 and police: Lumjia
Chauffer TOM: Amy

DRAMA SCRIPT

SCENE 1

ANDY: Hurry up and buy candy for Sandy and I! I need to be at the playground in ten minutes to meet Sandy!
CHAUFFER TOM: Yes, Young master, please wait in the car, I will be right back.
ANDY: Hurry! I’m going to complain to Mommy and Daddy if I’m late.
CHAUFFER TOM : (leaves to buy candy)
ANDY: Hmph. (crosses arms)
(Window breaks and kidnapper unlock the door)
(Kidnapper 2 holds onto Andy while kidnapper 1 takes the wheel)
ANDY: Ahh!! HELP ME! You get lost! Let go of me!
Kidnapper 2: Shut up kid!
(Chauffer comes back and sees what is happening)
CHAUFFER: What do you want!? Don’t touch him!! LET GO!
KIDNAPPER 1: SHUT UP! Both of you!
(ANDY struggles as one kidnapper holds him)
CHAUFFER TOM: Get out of the car! (tries to push away the kidnapper from the steering wheel)
KIDNAPPER1: So long!
ANDY: (crying) Oh no… don’t hurt me. Don’t take me away.
KIDNAPPER 2: Keep quiet! (slaps him)
ANDY: Argh!
(kidnapper 1 drives away leaving the chauffer behind)
[at the playground]
SANDY: Why isn’t ANDY here yet? He is usually punctual. I guess I will head home first.

SCENE 2

DAD: (working)
MOM: Shouldn’t they be back yet? It’s already half past 5.
DELINA: It’s okay, sister. I am sure they will come back soon. Don’t worry. (concerned)
MOM: But, they should be back by now.
DAD: Don’t make such a big fuss over it. They could have gone to grab a bite at McDonald’s or something.
MOM: You are always so unconcerned about Andy. All you do is work.
DELINA: Don’t read too much into it. They will be back when they should be.
MOM: (checks watch)
(chauffer TOM enters)
CHAUFFER TOM: (puffing) SIR, MADAM!
DELINA: (faking concern) What happened? You look so pale.
CHAUFFER TOM: FORGIVE ME… (KNEELS DOWN) Young master is…is…kidnapped.
MOM: (gasps)
DAD: (looks up from work) What?
DELINA: How can it be? How did it happen?
CHAUFFER TOM: I left young master in the car was he wanted me to buy some candy for Sandy and him. (exaggerated gestures) And…and I tried to stop them from driving away but they were already in the car by then! They drove away with young master! I…I...I’m really sorry. I don’t know why it even happened.
MOM: Oh Jesus. ANDY… (cries) No… (Grabs CHAUFFER) You. He was with you. Find him. Bring him back. I want my boy back!
DELINA: (comforts her) Calm down. It’ll be alright, okay? Just calm down first. Tom, I think you better leave first. I will go look for Sandy. She must be still waiting at the playground.
(DELINA and TOM EXITS)
MOM: Oh gosh.. this is terrible… I hope Sandy is fine.
(SANDY enters)
SANDY: Auntie, Uncle, have you seen ANDY? I have been waiting for him.
DAD: Sandy.. Andy is kidnapped. Auntie Delina just went to look for you. I will give her a call to let her know you’re safe first.
SANDY: ANDY is kidnapped? How can this be? (sobs)
(DAD’S PHONE RINGS as he picks it up)
DAD: Hello, yes speaking… HELLO? HELLO?
MOM: Who called? (Panic)
DAD: It was the kidnappers. They asked for a 100 million. We have 3 days.
MOM: Give it to them! Give it to them! Andy! We need to get Andy back. (breaks down into tears)
DAD: Calm down! You are not doing anything by crying. We need to call the police.
MOM: Are you sure we should do that?
(DELINA ENTERS)
DELINA: I couldn’t find… Thank goodness SANDY is here.
DAD: Delina, please explain to Eve that we must call the police. We do not have to succumb to their threats.
DELINA: (quickly cuts DAD off) NO! Don’t call the police! You don’t know what they might do to Andy!
MOM: Delina is right. Don’t call the police! They will harm Andy! Just give them all our money!
DAD: But…
DELINA: (interrupts again) Here, think about it, we don’t want Andy to be in danger, we just need to pay them and Andy would be back home safely.
DAD: (frustrated) Okay, I suppose you are right, I will go prepare the money.
SANDY: (still sobbing) I will go home now. I hope Andy will be safe.
MOM: Don’t worry Sandy.. don’t worry.
(SANDY leaves)

SCENE 3
SANDY: Please, let Andy be safe. Please…
(Sandy arrives at the playground)
Chauffer TOM: (back facing SANDY)
Sandy: (hides behind something upon seeing TOM)
Chauffer TOM: (on the phone) I really need the money! You know how hard this is for me…. Fine, I will give you the money but you better do a good job! You better not let anyone know about this. (walks off, frustrated)
SANDY: (covers her mouth trembling) No, It couldn’t be… (runs to Andy house)
SANDY: Uncle, Auntie! I was at the playground just now when I overheard Uncle Tom talking on the phone! He talking about money. Do you think he might have have anything to do with Andy?
MOM: No! It couldn’t be! Tom has been working with us for years.
DELINA: Are you really sure Sandy? However, Sister, we should talk to Tom, Andy’s safety is our upmost priority.
DAD: I’ll get TOM here and we can have a good chat.
(DAD EXITS)
SANDY: I’m not sure, but Uncle Tom was the only one who witnessed everything.
DELINA: Yes, it might all be planned. We really need to find out the truth.
MOM: (sobbing) I cannot believe this is happening to us.
(DAD ENTERS WITH TOM)
SANDY: (looks down)
MOM: TOM! Did you plan Andy’s kidnap?! Did you? Did you?
TOM: (looking confused) NO MAM! NO! I would never do such a thing.
DELINA: Tom, you know what Andy means to us, please be honest, did you really kidnap Andy? If you need money, you can always ask us, you do not have to resort to such methods. If you need 100 million for whatever reason, you could have asked. Why must you resort to kidnapping Andy?! (agitated) And, we have a witness here.
TOM: (looks at SANDY)
SANDY: I saw…I saw you at the playground!
DAD: Let’s listen to what Tom has to say first.
TOM: At the playground, I was talking to my son. He needed money for his studies…
DELINA: (looking flustered) I don’t believe you, Andy is my beloved nephew. Stop coming up with juvenile excuses! They won’t work!
SANDY: (looking at DELINA)
DAD: DELINA! Let him talk!
TOM: I would never think about kidnapping young master! I don’t even have the guts to defy him! Please believe me!
MOM: (sobbing)
DAD: (thinking)
DELINA: (smiles slightly and speaks slowly) It is not that we do not believe you but how do we know you’re not lying?
TOM: (looks shocked) I…I…
(PHONE CALL)
DELINA: Hello? I see… Okay I’ll be right there. (Hangs up) Hey I’ve got to go first. Sorry, my boss called and…
DAD: It’s ok. We can handle this.
DELINA: I’m really sorry that I couldn’t lend you my help at such a time.
MOM: Don’t worry, DELINA.
DELINA: I’ll see you.
SANDY: (glances at DELINA) I better go too, auntie and uncle. It’s almost dinner time.
MOM: Okay, be careful.
DAD: Bye, SANDY.
(out of the house)
SANDY: Something seems wrong with Aunt Delina, even though she appears concerned, somehow, I feel that she is trying to push the blame to Tom.. There’s something fishy going on.. I better follow her.

SCENE 4

(@garage)
KIDNAPPER 1: Can you stop crying?. (cigarette in mouth)
ANDY: (sobbing)
KIDNAPPER 2: Look at you, rich kid. Can’t do a thing. (kicks him)
ANDY: Ouch! Don’t touch me. (starts to cry on the floor)
KIDNAPPER 1: (pulls out gun from pocket) SHUT UP. (points at him)
(Delina enters)
DELINA: What are you doing? Don’t hurt him. We can’t get the money for that. And after all, he is my nephew. (glaring at ANDY)
KIDNAPPER 1: (gasps) Yes yes madam.
KIDNAPPER 2: We are sorry.
DELINA: Here’s your money, now leave!
(2 kidnappers take the money and exit)
DELINA: ANDY, look at you. (kneels down to hold his face) HAHAHA. You are all that I need. (stands up) All that I need is for this plan to work and I will be free. Life is so unfair… I am forced to do this. I have no choice. So, I decided to get back what I deserve, by myself(evil grin).
ANDY: Auntie… Why? (scared) Help! I don’t want to stay here.
DELINA: Just keep quiet! I’m sorry, I have no choice… Don’t worry. I won’t kill you. It’s not worth it.
ANDY: …. (Crying uncontrollably now)
DELINA: (snatched the gun from the kidnapper) ANDY, keep quiet okay? (gently points gun at his head) Bang. (says silently to scare ANDY)
ANDY: (jumps, controlling his sobs)

(door opens suddenly)
SANDY: ANDY!! You are here!
ANDY: SANDY!! SANDY!!
SANDY: And you… (looks at DELINA)
DELINA: (glances and shocked)
SANDY: I knew it was you!
DELINA: (throws gun to the ground and breaks down into tears) I’m sorry Andy, I really didn’t mean to do this… It was all Tom’s idea.
SANDY: (starts crying) Auntie Delina! Please stop lying and let us go. We won’t tell anyone.
DELINA: I SAID IT WASN’T ME! (switches to gentle tone) Trust me… I will let both of you off and we will go call the police! It was Tom. He needed the money for his son. He was desperate. Don’t blame him. And I had no choice, he threatened to harm Andy and the family!
(unties ANDY)
SANDY: Andy! (runs over to examine Andy) Are you okay?
ANDY: (nods head and stares at Delina)
DELINA: Come on children, let’s get out of here! We will tell the police what happened.
(police sirens)
DELINA: (glares at SANDY.) What’s going on?
SANDY: (holding onto weak Andy and sobbing) I knew from the start. I knew since the moment you mentioned 100 million. You were not present when the kidnappers called so how could you have known the ransom price. I knew something was wrong then, and you kept trying to blame Tom. I called the police before I entered. It’s over Auntie Delina. We all know it’s you.
DELINA: No.. it can’t be. It was Tom! It was Tom!
ANDY: Tom would never do such a thing, Auntie!
(police arrives)
DELINA: No.. (picks up gun)
Police: Put the gun down! ( points gun)
DELINA: (points gun to her own head and cries) I wanted money. All the inheritance goes to Eve, it’s just so unfair. Why did Dad hate me and leave me with nothing? I just wanted the money, I never expected things to turn out this way.
Police: I said put your gun down!
DELINA: I’m sorry Andy, I’m sorry Sandy.
(LOUD BANG!)
SANDY AND ANDY: AUNTIE DELINAAA!!!! (as Delina falls to the ground)

END of play

xo
Andrea